The language in the client sounds bad to a native English speaker. There is nothing totally incorrect as such. It is just the way certain things are worded isn't the way a native speaker would word it and it looks unprofessional. It is important to get the English correct or it seems like 'all your base are belong to us'.
I will give examples and my corrections:
Example: "Security is very important for NEM to avoid theft of NEM coins & assets."
Correction: "Wallet security is very important to avoid the theft of NEM coins & assets."
Example: "NIS requires to be booted."
Correction: "NIS needs to be booted", or "NEM requires NIS to be booted", or "NIS boot required".
Example: "NCC provides an access to your assets and NEMs like a traditional wallet does."
Correction: "NCC provides access to your assets and NEM like a traditional wallet." or "NCC provides an access pathway to your assets and NEM like a traditional wallet."
Example: "NCC requires access to an NIS server in order to operate. Standard is to have a local server active (is installed together with the NCC)."
Correction: "NCC requires access to an NIS server in order to operate. It is usual to have a local server active (this is installed along with the NCC)."
Thanks for the comments. I'll see if I can't improve the writing some when I get the chance.
The language in the client sounds bad to a native English speaker. There is nothing totally incorrect as such. It is just the way certain things are worded isn't the way a native speaker would word it and it looks unprofessional. It is important to get the English correct or it seems like 'all your base are belong to us'.
I will give examples and my corrections:
Example: "Security is very important for NEM to avoid theft of NEM coins & assets."
Correction: "Wallet security is very important to avoid the theft of NEM coins & assets."
Example: "NIS requires to be booted."
Correction: "NIS needs to be booted", or "NEM requires NIS to be booted", or "NIS boot required".
Example: "NCC provides an access to your assets and NEMs like a traditional wallet does."
Correction: "NCC provides access to your assets and NEM like a traditional wallet." or "NCC provides an access pathway to your assets and NEM like a traditional wallet."
Example: "NCC requires access to an NIS server in order to operate. Standard is to have a local server active (is installed together with the NCC)."
Correction: "NCC requires access to an NIS server in order to operate. It is usual to have a local server active (this is installed along with the NCC)."
If I may...are you a native english speaker ?
The language in the client sounds bad to a native English speaker. There is nothing totally incorrect as such. It is just the way certain things are worded isn't the way a native speaker would word it and it looks unprofessional. It is important to get the English correct or it seems like 'all your base are belong to us'.
I will give examples and my corrections:
Example: "Security is very important for NEM to avoid theft of NEM coins & assets."
Correction: "Wallet security is very important to avoid the theft of NEM coins & assets."
Example: "NIS requires to be booted."
Correction: "NIS needs to be booted", or "NEM requires NIS to be booted", or "NIS boot required".
Example: "NCC provides an access to your assets and NEMs like a traditional wallet does."
Correction: "NCC provides access to your assets and NEM like a traditional wallet." or "NCC provides an access pathway to your assets and NEM like a traditional wallet."
Example: "NCC requires access to an NIS server in order to operate. Standard is to have a local server active (is installed together with the NCC)."
Correction: "NCC requires access to an NIS server in order to operate. It is usual to have a local server active (this is installed along with the NCC)."
The suggestions look good to me
The language in the client sounds bad to a native English speaker. There is nothing totally incorrect as such. It is just the way certain things are worded isn't the way a native speaker would word it and it looks unprofessional. It is important to get the English correct or it seems like 'all your base are belong to us'.
I will give examples and my corrections:
Example: "Security is very important for NEM to avoid theft of NEM coins & assets."
Correction: "Wallet security is very important to avoid the theft of NEM coins & assets."
Example: "NIS requires to be booted."
Correction: "NIS needs to be booted", or "NEM requires NIS to be booted", or "NIS boot required".
Example: "NCC provides an access to your assets and NEMs like a traditional wallet does."
Correction: "NCC provides access to your assets and NEM like a traditional wallet." or "NCC provides an access pathway to your assets and NEM like a traditional wallet."
Example: "NCC requires access to an NIS server in order to operate. Standard is to have a local server active (is installed together with the NCC)."
Correction: "NCC requires access to an NIS server in order to operate. It is usual to have a local server active (this is installed along with the NCC)."
If I may...are you a native english speaker ?
Yes, from england
Agree with corrections…
Chinese translation are not so smooth either.
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